Use the type of clause, phrase, or grammar indicated to
complete the following sentence; you can add the phrase or clause before or
after the clause below:
...there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales...
Sentence 1. Add a phrase
Sentence 2. Add a dependent clause
Sentence 3. Add an independent clause
11 comments:
YOSUA ENGL140
At the new mall, there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales.
There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales because there were a lot of goods left.
There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales; everyone wanted to take advantage of the discounts.
There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales at every store in the mall.
There were many bargains in the after- Christmas sales when I bought my shoes.
Since there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales, I went shopping and bought a beautiful winter coat for a great price.
YOSUA:great sentences:-)
ZEINAB: #s 1 and 2--great; #3--this is another dependent clause;-)
#3 There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales, I went shopping and bought a beautiful winter coat for a great price.
ZEINAB:yes, but can you fix the punctuation?
Alexey ENGL140
To my delight, there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales.
There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales , but I’ve already spent all my money.
There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales; there were many people in the shopping centre.
ALEXEY:#1--good; #2--this is an independent clause; #3--good.
RufusENGL143
#1. There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales at the Edmonton Mall.
#2. At every mall in the city, there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales.
#3. There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales; we bought all our son’s birthday gifts.
Alexey ENGL140
#2 There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales although it wasn't advertised properly on the TV.
1. There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales to spend your money on.
2. There were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales making me spending more than planned.
3. When there were many bargains in the after-Christmas sales, I spend more than planned.
RUFUS:Great stuff:-)
ALEXEY:That's better:-)
SARA: #1--good; #2--that's another phrase; #3--yes, but there is a problem with the punctuation and the verb;-)
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