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18 January 2013
**GRAMMAR QUESTION, Jan. 18th, 2013**
My sons teacher
talked to my husband and I about the difficulty he was having with reading,
writing and he couldn’t complete the math homework. He said some testing is
required.
18 comments:
Zeinab140
said...
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and I about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing and how he is not completing his math homework. He also said that our son needs to be tested.
My son's teacher had a talk with my husband and I, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
My son´s teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son has with reading, writing, and completing the math homework. The teacher also said that our son required to be tested.
My sons teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son was having with reading, writing and not completing the math home work. The teacher also said that he needs to take some test.
ZEINAB:Almost--check pronoun usage;-) SUE:That's a good, concise way of doing it:-) PEGGY:That's close--check pronoun usage;-) YOSUA:A good solution:-) PETER: That's close--can you fix a punctuation error?
My son's teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing , and how he is not completing his math homework. The teacher also said that our son needs to be tested.
My son's teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulty our son was having with reading, writing and the fact he couldn’t complete the math homework. He said some testing must be done.
My son’s teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing. and not completing his math homework. The teacher also said that our son needs to be tested.
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulty he was having with his reading and writing, he was also having trouble completing his math homework. The teacher said some testing is required.
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulties he had with our son’s ability to read and write because the little one couldn’t complete the math homework. The teacher said some testing was required.
DIANE:A good solution:-) RUFUS:Yes--but note the typo on the punctuation;-) NATHAN:Almost--there's an ambiguity here caused by pronoun usage. Can you fix it? ALEXEY:Another good solution:-)
My sons teacher had a talk with my husband and me, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
My son's teacher told my husband and I that our son is required to some testing, due his difficulties with reading, writing and his math homework that is incomplete.
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulties he has with reading, writing and completing his math homework, for which some testing is required.
PEGGY:Almost there--you're missing an apostrophe;-) NICOLE: You are on the right track here, but there is a pronoun error and you are missing a verb word;-) SARA:That's very close, but there is ambiguity with your use of the pronoun "he";-)
My son's teacher had a talk with my husband and me, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
18 comments:
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and I about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing and how he is not completing his math homework. He also said that our son needs to be tested.
My son's teacher had a talk with my husband and I, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
Yosua ENGL140
My son´s teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son has with reading, writing, and completing the math homework. The teacher also said that our son required to be tested.
My sons teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son was having with reading, writing and not completing the math home work. The teacher also said that he needs to take some test.
ZEINAB:Almost--check pronoun usage;-)
SUE:That's a good, concise way of doing it:-)
PEGGY:That's close--check pronoun usage;-)
YOSUA:A good solution:-)
PETER: That's close--can you fix a punctuation error?
My son's teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing , and how he is not completing his math homework. The teacher also said that our son needs to be tested.
ZEINAB:thank you:-)
My son's teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulty our son was having with reading, writing and the fact he couldn’t complete the math homework. He said some testing must be done.
RufusENGL143
My son’s teacher talked to me and my husband about the difficulties our son is having with reading, writing. and not completing his math homework. The teacher also said that our son needs to be tested.
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulty he was having with his reading and writing, he was also having trouble completing his math homework. The teacher said some testing is required.
Alexey ENGL140
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulties he had with our son’s ability to read and write because the little one couldn’t complete the math homework. The teacher said some testing was required.
DIANE:A good solution:-)
RUFUS:Yes--but note the typo on the punctuation;-)
NATHAN:Almost--there's an ambiguity here caused by pronoun usage. Can you fix it?
ALEXEY:Another good solution:-)
My sons teacher had a talk with my husband and me, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
My son's teacher told my husband and I that our son is required to some testing, due his difficulties with reading, writing and his math homework that is incomplete.
My son’s teacher talked to my husband and me about the difficulties he has with reading, writing and completing his math homework, for which some testing is required.
PEGGY:Almost there--you're missing an apostrophe;-)
NICOLE: You are on the right track here, but there is a pronoun error and you are missing a verb word;-)
SARA:That's very close, but there is ambiguity with your use of the pronoun "he";-)
My son's teacher had a talk with my husband and me, about the difficulties my son was having when he was reading, writing and trying to complete his math homework. The teacher said my son required some testing.
PEGGY: Thank you!
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