If a sentence is singular, change it to the plural; if it
is plural, change it to the singular.
For Chinese New
Year there will be a celebration at the shopping mall as well as an outdoor one
at City Hall. Each celebration will feature a lion dance. Meanwhile, the
grocery story is selling specialty food in preparation for the celebration, and
it is decorating the store with large, red, lantern.
Each student must provide a slightly different answer.
11 comments:
For Chinese New Year there will be celebrations at the shopping malls as well as outdoor ones at City Hall. All celebrations will feature lion dances. Meanwhile, the grocery stores are selling specialty foods in preparation for the celebrations, and they are decorating the stores with large, red, lanterns.
For Chinese New Year there will be many celebrations at the shopping malls as well as outdoors ones at City Hall. All the celebrations will feature a lion dance. Meanwhile, the grocery stores are selling food in the preparation for the celebrations, and they are decorating the stores with large and red lanterns.
SARA: Great answer:-)
ZEINAB: There are 2 things to check here--a noun that you should make plural and a word you need to omit;-)
YOSUA ENGL140.
For Chinese New Year there will be several celebrations at different shopping malls as well as many outdoors ones at City Hall. Most of the celebrations will feature lion dances. Meanwhile, the grocery stores will be selling specialty foods in preparation for the celebrations, and they will decorate the stores with large, red, lanterns.
For Chinese New Year there will be countless celebrations at the various shopping malls as well as numerous outdoor ones at many City Halls. All celebrations will feature lions dancing. Meanwhile,most grocery stores are selling specialty food in preparation for the celebrations and they are decorating the stores with a mass of large,red laterns.
YOSUA:That works:-)
PEGGY: Apart from a spelling (typo) error, there is one problem--there is a big difference between lions dancing and a lion dance--check out the video on "What's Happening";-)
RufusENGL143
For Chinese New Year, there will be celebrations at the shopping malls as well as outdoor ones at City Halls. All celebrations will feature lion dances. Meanwhile, the grocery stores are selling specialty foods in preparation for the celebrations, and they are decorating the stores with large red lanterns.
Alexey ENGL140
For Chinese New Year there will be lots of celebrations at the shopping malls as well as many outdoors ones at many City Halls all around this country. Many celebrations will feature lion dances. Meanwhile, the grocery stores are selling specialty foods in preparation for the celebrations, and they are decorating the stores with large, red, lanterns.
RUFUS:Well done!
ALEXEY: A good variation:-)
For Chinese New Year there will be countless celebrations at the various shopping malls as well as numerous outdoor ones at many City Halls in Canada. All celebrations will feature lion dances. Meanwhile, most grocery stores are selling specialty food in preparation for the celebrations, and they are decorating the stores with a mass of large, red laterns.
PEGGY:That's much better:-)
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