This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
Alexey ENGL140Famed thief began spasmodically laugh when realized that he is accused of the pet shop heist.
The bank heist became dramatic when the bank's manager began behaving spasmodically and was unable to open the safe.
ALEXEY:Vocabulary is good, but there are several words missing from the sentence and a word form error;-)PEGGY: You need to rethink your usage of "spasmodically".
When the heist was detected, the runes on the treasure chest started to glow, and the thief started to spasmodically convulse.
GEORGE: Great sentence:-)
The bank heist was becoming troublesome for the thieves, when the bank's manager began spasmodically shaking and wasn't able to open the safe.
PEGGY: That's better, but note that there is no comma before a dependent clause;-)
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