18 April 2013

**GRAMMAR QUESTION, April 18th, 2013**

There are a number of grammatical errors in the following sentence. Rewrite the sentence to correct for those errors. There are many possible solutions.

Studying on my own pace is a lot of benefit for me do to I am not needing to be worrying about no time for attend class. Being a single parent, the classes allows me working and studying and to spend time with my children.

The problems, and their corrections, will be posted in the next edition of the blog.

10 comments:

Peggy Ronning said...

Studying at my own pace is beneficial to me because I don't need to worry that I don't have enough time to attend class. Being a single parent the class allows me to work and study, and also to spent time with my children.

Marina 143 said...

Marina 143
Being a single parent, I study on my own pace that benefits me in various ways. For instance, I don’t need to be worried about having time to attend classes and still be able to work, to study, and to spend enough time with my children.

KennethENGL140 said...

Being a single parent, studying at my own pace is beneficial.It allows me to work, study and spend time with my children without having to worry about finding time to physically attend classes.

Peggy Ronning said...

Studying at my own pace is beneficial to me because I don't need to worry about not having enough time to attend class. Being a single parent, the class allows me to work and study, and also to spend time with my children.

Veronica Baig said...

PEGGY:The correction is the better version, but you have a dangling modifier you need to think about;-)
MARINA:Almost--there is some punctuation missing;-)
KENNETH:An excellent solution:-)

Peggy Ronning said...

It is a hugh benefit to me to be able to study at my own pace because I don't need to worry about not having enough time to attend class. Being a single parent, the class allows me to work and study, and also spent time with my children.

Peggy Ronning said...

It is a hugh benefit for me to be able to study at my own pace because I need not worry about having enough time to attend class. Being a single parent, the class allows me to work, study and also spent time with my children.

Veronica Baig said...

PEGGY: The dangling modifier persists:-( Ask yourself who is a single parent.

Peggy Ronning said...

It is a hugh benefit for me to be able to study at my own pace becuse I need not worry about having enough time to attend class. I am a single parent,and the class allows me to work, study, and also spent time with my children.

Veronica Baig said...

PEGGY: That's it!