4 April 2013

**ALL CHANGE!, April 4th, 2013**



Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make and number the change you make.

My young nephews greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun        #3 Indirect object noun        
 #4 Adjective               #5 Adverb       #6 Verb name              #7 Verb tense

11 comments:

Peggy Ronning said...

#1 The children greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.

Marina 143 said...

Marina 143
My young children greedily ate the chocolate bunnies on Easter.

Alexey said...

Alexey ENGL140

#3 Indirect object noun

My young children greedily ate the chocolate bunnies on Christmas.

Marina 143 said...

Marina 143
My famished children greedily ate the chocolate bunnies on Christmas.

Veronica Baig said...

PEGGY:yes, but you shouldn't have left out the other modifying words;-)
MARINA:yes!
ALEXEY:yes--they must have been left over since the previous Easter;-)
MARINA: Yes!

George M140 said...

#5 Adverb

My famished children voraciously ate the chocolate bunnies on Christmas.

Katherine said...

Katherine ENGL140

#6 Verb name

My famished children voraciously bit the chocolate bunnies on Christmas.

Veronica Baig said...

GEORGE:yes!
KATHERINE:yes!

Peggy Ronning said...

#7 Verb tense.

My famished children have voraciously eaten the chocolate bunnies before Christmas.

Veronica Baig said...

PEGGY; yes!

KennethENGL140 said...

Changes: #1 Subject noun

The mice greedily ate the chocolate eggs on Easter.