4 June 2013

**GRAMMAR QUESTION, June 4th, 2013**

Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The exotic imported sports dark red car has been driving to fast when it'd skid of the road and the passenger too young women is injured serious.

Remember that there are many possible correct answers.

10 comments:

Regina140 said...

The exotic dark red imported sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road and two young women passengers were seriously injured.

SarahG said...

The exotic, imported, dark red, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.

Veronica Baig said...

REGINA:You have solved a lot of the problems, but you have forgotten about the punctuation;-)
SARAH: Almost--think about adjective word order;-)

SarahG said...

The exotic, dark red, imported, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.

(Order: opinion, colour, origin, purpose)

Veronica Baig said...

SARAH: Thank you:-)

Mike140 said...

The exotic, dark red, imported, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.

Veronica Baig said...

MIKE: You need to come up with a different solution;-)

Valerie Lefebvre said...

The exotic, dark red imported sports car was driving too fast when it skidded off the road; two young women, who were passengers had serious injuries.

Veronica Baig said...

VALERIE: All good except the punctuation;-)

Katherine Eng 140 said...

The exotic, imported sports dark red car was driven too fast and when it'd skidded off the road; the passenger and two young women were injured seriously.