Sentence 1: Many
people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 3:This
winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts
of the country.
2 comments:
Spring is particularly appreciated in a country like Canada, where most people experience a very long winter specially this one, which as seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
Good try, Audrey!
But what about the first sentence?
Maybe we could say something like:
Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter, and this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country, so many people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
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