Yasmin
excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.
Normally, I request that each participant make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below. Once again, you are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
8 comments:
Julia excitedly rode her new bicycle to school.
Julia excitedly rode her new tricycle to school.
Julia excitedly rode her new tricycle to her uncle.
Julia excitedly rode her old tricycle to her uncle.
Sorry...
Julia excitedly rode her new tricycle to her uncle's house.
Julia excitedly rode her old tricycle to her uncle's house.
Julia sadly rode her old tricycle to her uncle's house.
6. Julia sadly drove her old tricycle to her uncle's house.
7. Julia sadly drives her old tricycle to her uncle's house.
Wonderful!!
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