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Sentence 1:In Christmas time Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.Sentence 2:Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, because it’s a free day for all the people.Sentence 3:Christmas time it’s a beautiful season for all the families specially when Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday
Santa, the jolly old man, arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Add a phrase:Just last week, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.Dependent Clause:Since he had arranged to do so, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.Independent Clause:Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, and the mall staff were prepared to greet him.
Add a phrase:What a great time, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday. Dependent Clause:Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday before the parade. Independent Clause: Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, the children were very excited.
Sorry made the last comment anonymous by mistake.
1. I was there when sanata arrived at the mall on saturday.2. sannta arrived at the mall on saturday, but kids were tired of waiting. 3.satsanata arrived at the mall on saturday, to take pictures with childern.
Great effort! I'm glad to see so many attempts, but I see a few problems here.Can anyone say which answers are correct and what some of the problems are with the others?
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Sentence 1:
In Christmas time Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Sentence 2:
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, because it’s a free day for all the people.
Sentence 3:
Christmas time it’s a beautiful season for all the families specially when Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday
Santa, the jolly old man, arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Add a phrase:
Just last week, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Dependent Clause:
Since he had arranged to do so, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Independent Clause:
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, and the mall staff were prepared to greet him.
Add a phrase:
What a great time, Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday.
Dependent Clause:
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday before the parade.
Independent Clause:
Santa arrived at the mall on Saturday, the children were very excited.
Sorry made the last comment anonymous by mistake.
1. I was there when sanata arrived at the mall on saturday.
2. sannta arrived at the mall on saturday, but kids were tired of waiting.
3.satsanata arrived at the mall on saturday, to take pictures with childern.
Great effort! I'm glad to see so many attempts, but I see a few problems here.
Can anyone say which answers are correct and what some of the problems are with the others?
Post a Comment