29 November 2013

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the following sentence as indicated.

My younger sister quickly brought her three children to see Santa.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given, and wait until someone else has posted the next change before making another. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.

Each participant should make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.

Changes:                                                                                                                              

1. subject noun
2. direct object noun              
3. indirect object noun                      
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)        
6. verb name          
7. verb tense

5 comments:

AndreaS140,143 said...

Subject Noun:

My younger brother quickly brought his three children to see Santa.

Guadalupe 140 said...

Direct object noun.

My younger sister quickly take her three children to see Santa.

Dvidito said...

My younger sister quickly brought her three children to see the Christmas Elf.

hammad.s (eng140) said...

My older sister quickly brought her three beautiful children to see the Christmas Elf.

Michael said...

Good effort, everyone!

Guadalupe, you tried to change the verb rather than the noun (and you didn't put it in the right tense).