This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
15 November 2013
NUMBER CHANGE
Instructions: If the sentence is singular, change it to the plural; if it is plural, change it to the singular.
The little girl became shy when her mother took her to the mall to see Santa; she found the big, bushy beard scary, and she also felt nervous because the bigger boy who lived near her teased her because of her shyness.
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Guadalupe Perez140
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The little girls became shy when their mothers took them to the mall to see Santa; they found the big, bushy beards scary, and they also felt nervous because the bigger boys who lived near their teased their because of their shyness
Great try, Guadalupe. But there is a mistake with your pronouns.
You want to say something like:
The little girls became shy when their mothers took them to the mall to see Santa; they found the big, bushy beards scary, and they also felt nervous because the bigger boys who lived near THEM teased THEM because of their shyness.
2 comments:
The little girls became shy when their mothers took them to the mall to see Santa; they found the big, bushy beards scary, and they also felt nervous because the bigger boys who lived near their teased their because of their shyness
Great try, Guadalupe. But there is a mistake with your pronouns.
You want to say something like:
The little girls became shy when their mothers took them to the mall to see Santa; they found the big, bushy beards scary, and they also felt nervous because the bigger boys who lived near THEM teased THEM because of their shyness.
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