Correct the errors in the following sentence:
The exotic imported sports dark red car has been driving to fast when it'd
skid of the road and the passenger too young women is injured serious.
Remember that there are many possible correct answers.
10 comments:
The exotic dark red imported sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road and two young women passengers were seriously injured.
The exotic, imported, dark red, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.
REGINA:You have solved a lot of the problems, but you have forgotten about the punctuation;-)
SARAH: Almost--think about adjective word order;-)
The exotic, dark red, imported, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.
(Order: opinion, colour, origin, purpose)
SARAH: Thank you:-)
The exotic, dark red, imported, sports car had been driving too fast when it skidded off the road. The passengers, two young women, were seriously injured.
MIKE: You need to come up with a different solution;-)
The exotic, dark red imported sports car was driving too fast when it skidded off the road; two young women, who were passengers had serious injuries.
VALERIE: All good except the punctuation;-)
The exotic, imported sports dark red car was driven too fast and when it'd skidded off the road; the passenger and two young women were injured seriously.
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