Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is
an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible
bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for
internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to
pursue their careers in Canada
because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with
accreditation, training, or upgrading.
3 comments:
Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties; therefore, the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for them to help pay such costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.
SarahG 143
SARAH: You've done a good job here:-)
Many immigrants find pursuing their professional careers in Canada challenging because of accreditation difficulties; which can be alleviated by accessing the Immigrant Access Fund that will assist with paying the cost associated with accreditation, training or upgrading.
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