Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Pauls always
been borrowing his red stylish sporty-looking newer car to his brother who’s
lending it while his old battered rust-spotted white vehicle is in the garage
for repairing.
Remember that there is more than one possible correct answer;
each student should provide a different answer.
5 comments:
Paul is always lending his newer, stylish, sporty-looking, red car to his brother, while his old, battered, rust-spotted, white vehicle is in the garage for repairs.
SarahG 143
SARAH: review the "previous grammar question" to check on adjective word order;-)
Paul is always lending his stylish, sporty-looking, newer, red car to his brother, while his battered, rust-spotted, old, white vehicle is in the garage for repairs.
SarahG 143
Paul is always lending his stylish, sporty-looking, new, red car to his brother, who's borrowing it while his old, battered, rust-spotted, white vehicle is in the garage for repairs.
SARAH: Better--there are just two that should be reversed;-)
MIKE: Almost--reverse the order of two of those adjectives;-)
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