The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse, consequently, she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse, consequently she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse; consequently she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
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His excuse was that he acted subserviently in the malicious fraud; which was not seen as a satisfactory account by the judge.
Alexey ENGL140
He subserviently begged for mercy of his malicious enemy.
SARA:OK but can you please check the punctuation?
ALEXEY:Wow--did he have much hope? Good sentence.
The little girl subserviently sleeps on the floor to obey her malicious step mother’s order.
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His excuse was that he acted subserviently in the malicious fraud, which was not seen as a satisfactory account by the judge.
Yosua
Engl140
He has never subserviently bow to a malicious king.
Yosua
Engl140
He has never subserviently bowed to a malicious king.
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse, consequently, she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
ZEINAB: Good sentence:-)
SARA:That's better:-)
YOSUA:Interesting--also good!
PEGGY:Good use of the vocab--now can you fix the punctuation?
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse, consequently she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
PEGGY: Review the punctuation when you have 2 independent clauses and no coordinating conjunction;-)
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse; consequently she continued to be fearful and act subserviently when dealing with others.
PEGGY: The vocab is good, but you need to check for an agreement error;-)
The women had endured many years of cruel and malicious abuse; consequently she was fearful and she acted subserviently with most people.
PEGGY: The problem is that you have plural noun "women" in the first clause, and the singular pronoun "she" in the second;-)
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