Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can
only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted
the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1
writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2
Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change
at a time and keeps to the order indicated. If you complete all 7
changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should
build on the changes that the previous students make and number the change
you make.
My younger
sister gleefully received flowers for her birthday.
Changes: #1 Subject noun #2 Direct object noun #3 Indirect object noun
#4 Adjective #5 Adverb #6 Verb name #7 Verb tense
19 comments:
My younger niece gleefully received flowers for her birthday.
Yosua ENGL140.
2 Direct Object noun.
My younger niece gleefully received chocolates for her birthday.
Alexey ENGL140
#3 Indirect object
My younger niece gleefully received chocolates for her anniversary.
My younger niece appreciatively received chocolates for her anniversary.
ZEINAB: yes!
YOSUA:yes!
ALEXEY:yes!
KATHERINE: You've made change #5--the adverb; you need to change the adjective;-)
Katherine ENGL140
#4 Adjective
My beautiful niece gleefully received chocolates for her anniversary.
#5 Adverb
My beautiful niece cheerfully received chocolates for her anniversary.
Hopefully I'm not too late, I changed each one...
Subject Noun
My younger sister gleefully received flowers for her birthday.
Direct Object Noun
My younger sister gleefully received balloons for her birthday.
Indirect Object
My younger sister gleefully received balloons for her graduation.
Adjective
My intelligent sister gleefully received balloons for her graduation.
Adverb
My intelligent sister joyfully received balloons for her graduation.
Verb Name
My intelligent sister joyfully accepted balloons for her graduation.
Verb Tense
My intelligent sister joyfully accepts balloons for her graduation.
KATHERINE:Thank you:-)
GEORGE:yes!
NICOLE:You needed to make just change #6. Your answers are all good.
NEXT STUDENT: PLEASE MAKE CHANGE #2 TO NICOLE'S LAST SENTENCE.
My intelligent sister joyfully accepts cash for her graduation.
Marina 143
My intelligent sister joyfully accepts cash for her pet care job.
My mother joyfully accepts cash for her pet care job.
SALEHA:yes!
MARINA: yes!
NAZNEEN:you have omitted the adjective instead of changing it;-)
Marina 143
My hard-working mother joyfully accepts cash for her pet care job.
My hard-working mother cheerfully accepts cash for her pet care job.
Marina 143
My hard-working mother cheerfully declines cash for her pet care job.
MARINA: Thanks for fixing the problem:-)
PEGGY: yes!
MARINA: yes--but a bad decision;-)
Marina 143
Well...
My hard-working mother cheerfully counts cash for her pet care job.
P.S. Is it better? :-D
MARINA: it didn't make any difference to your previous answer being correct;-)
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