Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is
an important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible
bonus points! Try to combine the following three sentences.Sentence 1: Easter is a four-day weekend for most of us.
Sentence 2: Many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period.
Sentence 3: Many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations.
8 comments:
Easter is four-day weekends for most of us; many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period, and many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations.
Alexey ENGL140
Easter is a four-day weekend for most of us, and many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations; many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period.
ZEINAB: A good sentence!
ALEXEY: Well done!
Many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations, and Easter is four-day weekends for most of us; many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period.
Easter is a four-day weekend for most of us, many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period; and many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations.
Easter is a four-day weekend for most of us, and many people eat too much chocolate over this holiday period; many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations.
Many of the symbols associated with Easter come from ancient spring-time celebrations; today for most of us, it is a four-day holiday weekend when many people eat too much chocolate.
SALEHA:Nicely done!
VALERIE: You need to check the punctuation and think about the logical connection between the ideas;-)
NAZNEEN: A good answer:-)
PEGGY: Excellent!
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