This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
When I eat all of the deserts, I would like to have a few glasses of milk, some peppermint teas, a peanut butter cookie, and several piece of cheesecake!
Good -- but be sure not to change the original meaning of the sentence. In this case, it would have been best to leave the initial phrase "for dessert" (which cannot be made plural).
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