4 January 2017


Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The silver, new, shiney car was drove by Tim and I when we  had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.

The solution will be posted in the next edition of the blog.


dianaz said...

The new shiny silver car was driven by Tim, and I when we went to see the Rocky Mountains in Western Canada. While traveling, we stopped at several tourist traps along the way. On our travels we never encountered any wildlife, not even a bear. However, the beautiful wild flowers along the highway were in full bloom.

Michael said...

I still see some errors in your response. I will post the full solution soon!