12 November 2015

*SENTENCE COMBINATION*

Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences. Do not use a semi-colon.
Sentence 1: The children were clamouring to see Santa Clause at the mall.
Sentence 2: The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers.
Sentence 3: The line to see Santa was very long. 
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2 comments:

Lacey 140 said...

The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers, and the line to see Santa was very long as the children were clamoring to see Santa at the mall.

13 November 2015 at 10:49
Michael said...

Well done, Lacy. But I don't think you need the final phrase:

The mall was crowded with Christmas shoppers, and the line to see Santa was very long as the children were clamoring to see him.

26 November 2015 at 15:12

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