8 August 2014

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the following sentence as indicated.

A little deer lazily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.


You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.


When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.


Changes:                                                                                                                          


1. subject noun

2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

7 comments:

rehabo said...

A baby hippo happily nibbled the lush grass around the tall trees.
1- subject noun

Audrey L said...

A baby hippo happily nibbled the lush flowers around the tall trees.
2- direct object noun

Audrey L said...

A baby hippo happily nibbled the lush flowers around the tall hills.
3- indirect object noun

Yu Jin said...

4. adjective(s)
A young hippo happily nibbled the red flowers around the little hills.

Yu Jin said...

5. adverb
A young hippo lazily nibbled the red flowers around the little hills.

Cecilia Marcillo said...

6. verb name
A young hippo cheerfully peck the red flowers around the little hills

Michael said...

Well done! We are finally starting to work our way through the list! Yay!

Cecilia, your sentence should only change the verb (not the adverb). And don't forget put it in the past tense (and add a period). Your sentence should read:

A young hippo Lazily pecked the red flowers around the little hills.