31 January 2013

**GRAMMAR QUESTION, Jan. 31st, 2013**



Much stores and shopping centres prepare for chinese new year and Valentines day, there is a special display, traditionally Chinese food, and decoration, although chocolate and flowers for Valentines day,  greetings cards, and cloths with hearts and roses are common.

15 comments:

Sara said...

Many stores and shopping centres are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine’s Day; although chocolate, flowers, greeting cards, and cloths with hearts and roses are common for Valentine’s Day, there will be a special display, traditional Chinese food and decorations.

Peggy Ronning said...

Preparations for Valentine's Day and Chinese New Year are beginning in many stores and shopping centers; they will not only have the usual displays of Valentine's chocolates, flowers, greeting cards and cloths with hearts and flowers, but also they will have special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations.

Zeinab140 said...

Many stores and shopping centres are prepared for the Chinese New Year and Valentine’s Day so there are special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations; there are also common displays of chocolate, flowers, greetings cards and cloths with hearts and roses for Valentine’s Day.

Veronica Baig said...

SARA:That's a good way of doing it--now can you check for a word confusion error?
PEGGY:Almost there--can you check for word confusion?
ZEINAB: You also have a word confusion error; otherwise, this is good;-)

Yosua said...

YOSUA ENGL140.

Many stores and shopping centres are prepared for Chinese New Year and Valentine´s Day; there will be special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations even though chocolates, flowers, greeting cards, and cloths with hearts and roses are common for Valentine´s Day.

Peggy Ronning said...

Preparations for Valentine's Day and Chinese New Year are beginning in many stores and shopping centers; they will not only have the usual displays of Valentine's chocolates, flowers, greeting cards and cloths decorated with roses and flowers, but also they will have special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations.

Veronica Baig said...

YOSUA:Almost there--you have a word confusion error;-)
PEGGY: Sorry--you need to check for word confusion still:-(

Sara said...

Many stores and shopping centres are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine’s Day; although chocolate, flowers, greeting cards, and clothes with hearts and roses are common for Valentine’s Day, there will be a special display, traditional Chinese food and decorations.

RufusENGL143 said...

RufusENGL143

Many stores and shopping centres are preparing for Chinese New Year and Valentine’s Day; there will be a special display of traditional Chinese food and decorations, chocolate, flowers, greeting cards, and cloths with hearts and roses for the Valentine’s Day.

yosua said...

YOSUA ENGL140.

Many stores and shopping centres are prepared for Chinese New Year and Valentine´s Day; there will be special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations even though chocolates, flowers, greeting cards, and clothes with hearts and roses are common for Valentine´s Day.

Alexey said...

Alexey ENGL140

Many stores and shopping centres have already prepared for Chinese New Year and Valentine´s Day so there will be special displays, traditional Chinese food and decorations, as well as chocolate and flowers for Valentine’s Day, greeting cards, and clothes with hearts and roses will be common.

Veronica Baig said...

SARA:Thank you:-)
RUFUS:You're on the right track--check for a word confusion error and an article that should be omitted;-)
YOSUA: That's it!
ALEXEY: An excellent solution:-)

Zeinab140 said...

Many stores and shopping centres are prepared for the Chinese New Year and Valentine's Day so there are special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations; there are also common displays of chocholates,flowers,greeting cards and clothes with hearts and roses for Valentine's Day.

Peggy Ronning said...

Preparations for Valentine's Day and Chinese New Years are beginning in many stores and shopping centers; they will not only have the usual displays of Valentine's chocolates, flowers, greeting cards and clothes decorated with roses and flowers, but also they will have special displays of traditional Chinese food and decorations.

Veronica Baig said...

ZEINAB:That's it!
PEGGY: Thank you:-)