31 January 2013

**ALL CHANGE! Jan. 31st, 2013**

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated. You can only change the exact word in the sequence given; after someone else has posted the next change, then you can post another change. For instance, student 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Student 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes that noun. Each student only makes one change at a time and keeps to the order indicated.If you complete all 7 changes, then start making more changes again from 1 to 7. Each student should build on the changes that the previous students make.

Tom usually gives red roses to his wife on Valentine’s Day.

Changes: #1 Subject noun      #2  Direct object noun         #3 Indirect object noun          
#4 Adjective               #5 Adverb          #6 Verb name                  #7 Verb tense

Please number the change you make.

12 comments:

Sara said...

#subject noun
Bob usually gives red roses to his wife on Valentine’s Day.

Zeinab140 said...

Tom usually gives red roses to his girlfriend on Valentine’s Day.

Veronica Baig said...

SARA: yes!
ZEINAB: You needed to change Sara's sentence (keep the change she made). Also, you have changed the indirect object not the direct one;-)

Yosua said...

Engl140.

Direct object noun

Bob usually gives white carnations to his wife on Valentine’s Day.

Peggy Ronning said...

#3 Indirect object noun.
Bob usually gives white carnations to his sweetheart on Valentine's Day.

Veronica Baig said...

YOSUA: Yes--but you changed the adjective, too;-)
PEGGY: yes!

Alexey said...

Alexey ENGL140

#4 Adjective

Bob usually gives red carnations to his sweetheart on Valentine's Day.

RufusENGL143 said...

RufusENGL143

#5 Adverb

Bob usually gives red roses to his girl friend on Valentine’s Day

Veronica Baig said...

ALEXEY: yes!
RUFUS: That's not the adverb:-(
NEXT STUDENT: Please make change #5 to Alexey's answer.

Zeinab140 said...

#5 Adverb
Bob generally gives red carnations to his sweetheart on Valentine's Day.

Peggy Ronning said...


#6 Verb Name

Bob generally delivers red carnations to his sweetheart on Valentine's Day.

Veronica Baig said...

ZEINAB:yes!
PEGGY: yes!