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The baseball players were anxiously waiting for the games to start, but they were also nervous because they knew that a scout from the major league was there, and every player wanted to make a good impression.
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The baseball player was anxiously waiting for the game to start, but he was also nervous because he knew that a scout from the major league was there, and every player wanted to make a good impression.
Well done -- though I think you could have made "a scout" and "every player" plural (i.e., "scouts" and "all the players").
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