This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
5 February 2015
*SENTENCE COMBINATION*
Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 1: The world is uncertain.
Sentence 2: In this world, we cannot cannot know what the future will bring.
Sentence 3: We must be prepared for any eventuality.
3 comments:
BaileyPelech
said...
In this world, we cannot cannot know what the future will bring, so we must be prepared for any eventuality; as the world is uncertain.
3 comments:
In this world, we cannot cannot know what the future will bring, so we must be prepared for any eventuality; as the world is uncertain.
Good try, Bailey, but there are a few problems with your answer. The most serious is the use of the semi-colon before the subordinate clause.
Here is a helpful link: http://www.chompchomp.com/terms/subordinateclause.htm
The trick here is to see that "The world is uncertain" can be made into a modifier; then the rest falls into place:
In this uncertain world, we cannot cannot know what the future will bring, so we must be prepared for any eventuality.
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