This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
17 October 2014
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
When
the committee had met last week it is decided that they approved constructing
of a new retiring centre for benefiting Seniors and there family’s which had
been living in a surrounding area
Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
7 comments:
Audrey L
said...
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who are living in the surrounding area.
The committee met last week to decide if they should approve the construction of the new retirement center that would benefit seniors and their families that live in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve the construction of a new retirement center for the benefit of the seniors and their families living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, they decided to approve construction of a new retirement center which will benefit seniors and their families that live in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve the construction of a new retirement centre for the benefit of the seniors and their families living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who are living in the surrounding area.
7 comments:
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who are living in the surrounding area.
The committee met last week to decide if they should approve the construction of the new retirement center that would benefit seniors and their families that live in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve the construction of a new retirement center for the benefit of the seniors and their families living in the surrounding area.
ENGL 155
morganri2
Ladawn Funk (Tutor)
When the committee met last week, they decided to approve construction of a new retirement center which will benefit seniors and their families that live in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve the construction of a new retirement centre for the benefit of the seniors and their families living in the surrounding area.
When the committee met last week, it decided to approve construction of a new retirement centre to benefit seniors and their families who are living in the surrounding area.
Wow! You guys did a great job this time. It looks like you caught most (or all) of the errors.
I will post the full solution soon.
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