This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
31 October 2014
*GRAMMAR QUESTION*
Correct the errors in the following sentence:
Not only you and you’re brother’s, but also your sister’s needs altaring there plans and being home early: too clean a house preparing for our dinner’s party and you will have to make the appetizers instead of laying on the couch for watching TV .
Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.
6 comments:
SabrinaD155
said...
Not only you, but also your brothers and sisters need to altar your plans and be home early: to clean the house to prepare for our dinner party, you will need to make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean the house, prepare for our dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean our house, prepare for the dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch and watching TV .
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean the house, prepare for our dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
You and your siblings need to be home early to clean and prepare the house for your dinner party, and instead of lying on the couch you guys can make appetizers.
6 comments:
Not only you, but also your brothers and sisters need to altar your plans and be home early: to clean the house to prepare for our dinner party, you will need to make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean the house, prepare for our dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean our house, prepare for the dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch and watching TV .
Not only you and your brothers but also your sisters need to alter your plans and be home early to clean the house, prepare for our dinner party, and make the appetizers instead of lying on the couch watching TV.
Good try!
There are still a few errors in your response, Sabrina.
Audrey, Liudmila and Olena seem to have corrected most of the mistakes.
I'll post a full explanation soon.
You and your siblings need to be home early to clean and prepare the house for your dinner party, and instead of lying on the couch you guys can make appetizers.
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