Sentence 1: A $2,000 car has been
introduced in India
Sentence 2: It is more available and affordable for the masses.
Sentence 2: It is more available and affordable for the masses.
Sentence 3: It may also cause a
number of problems in India
5 comments:
A $2,000 car has been introduced lately and it is more available and affordable for the masses, but it may also cause a number of problems in India and elsewhere.
Although a $2,000 car which has been introduced in India is more available and affordable for the masses, it may also cause a number of problems in India and elsewhere.
A $2,000 car has been introduced in India, it is more available and affordable for the masses, but it may also cause a number of problems in India and elsewhere.
There has been a $2,000 car that has been introduced in India, there are more models available and it is affordable for the masses. However, it may also cause a number of problems in India and elsewhere.
Good job, Audrey. But I would say try to include the fact that the car was introduced in India.
Good job, Liudmila. But avoid using "which" in restrictive clauses; use "that" instead.
Yu Jin and Bailey, watch out for the comma splice.
Bailey, you made two sentences (rather than one).
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