4 April 2013
**NUMBER CHANGE, April 4th, 2013**
If a sentence is singular, change it to the plural; if it is plural, change it to the singular.
The snow storm was intense; it left the city covered in a metre of snow. During the storm, there was a bad car accident as the car driver was unable to see the road ahead of him and slid into the path of an oncoming vehicle. A chain reaction accident occurred as one car and truck after another skidded into the pile up.
Each student should write a slightly different answer.
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The snow storms were intense; they left the cities covered in meters of snow. During the storms, there were bad car accidents as car drivers were unable to see the roads ahead of them and slid into the paths of oncoming vehicles. Several chain reaction accidents ocurred as cars and trucks, one after another skid into the piled up cars.
Alexey ENGL140
The snow storms were intense; they left the cities covered in meters of snow. During the storms, there were bad car accidents as the car drivers were unable to see the road ahead of them and slid into the paths of oncoming vehicles. Chain reaction accidents occurred as some cars and trucks skidded ones after others into the pile-ups.
PEGGY: You have the plurals, but there is a verb tense issue (last verb) and a spelling error;-)
ALEXEY:You start well, there is a word that needs to be made plural (2nd sentence), and there is no such phrase as "ones after others."
The snow storms were intense; they left the cities covered in meters of snow. During the storms, there were bad car accidents as car drivers were unable to see the roads ahead of them and slid into the paths of oncoming vehicles. Several chain reaction accidents occured as cars and trucks, one after another, skidded into the piled up cars.
PEGGY; I don't know what spelling error I thought I saw--the correct spelling is "occurred"; everything is good now;-)
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