Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an
important skill in writing. There are many ways to do this--many possible bonus
points! Try to combine the following three sentences.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in such a cold country where most people experience a very long winter.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country.
3 comments:
Many people in Canada are looking forward to spring; spring is particularly appreciated in such a cold country where most people experience a very long winter, and this winter has seemed longer than most with snow still on the ground in many parts of the country.
With snow still on the ground in many parts of Canada; people in Canada appreciate and look forward to spring because it is a cold country where most people experience a very long winter
PEGGY:Excellent sentence:-)
KENNETH:Almost--think about punctuation and clause order (things that make sense together should go together).
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