8 January 2016


Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The silver, new, shiney car was drove by Tim and I when we  had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.

The solution will be posted in the next edition of the blog.


Leah said...

When Tim and I drove to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some of the other tourist traps along the highway, we drove a shiny, new, silver car. Along the way, we did not see a single bear; however we saw many little wild animals and the wildflowers were in bloom.
Leah Eng 140

Michael said...

Good try, Leah. But there are still some errors that need to be fixed. Can you see them?

Michael said...

I will post the full solution soon!