8 January 2016

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":


participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";


participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";


participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";

etc.


You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.


Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.


Here is the sentence:


The judge angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.

Changes:                                                                                                                          

1. subject noun

2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

4 comments:

Enya140 said...

1. subject noun: The magistrate angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
2. direct object noun: The magistrate angrily handed down a long judgement to the unrepentant criminal.
3. indirect object noun: The magistrate angrily handed down a long judgement to the unrepentant culprit.
4. adjective(s): The magistrate angrily handed down a short judgement to the repentant culprit.
5. adverb(s): The magistrate happily handed down a short judgement to the repentant culprit.
6. verb name: The magistrate happily delivered a short judgement to the repentant culprit.
7. verb tense: The magistrate will happily deliver a short judgement to the repentant culprit.

Leah said...

1. subject noun= The mom angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
2. direct object noun= The mom angrily handed down a long list to the unrepentant criminal.
3. indirect object noun= The mom angrily handed down a long list to the unrepentant child.
4. adjective(s)= The mom willingly handed down a gigantic list to the repentant child.
5. adverb(s)= The mom willingly handed up a gigantic list to the repentant child.
6. verb name= The mom willingly threw up a gigantic list to the repentant child.
7. verb tense= Yesterday, the mom willingly threw up a gigantic list to the repentant child.
Leah Eng 140

angel Paniagua Perez said...

angel 140

1. subject noun
The king angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
2. direct object noun
The judge angrily handed down a long stick to the unrepentant criminal.
3. indirect object noun
The judge angrily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant student. 4. adjective(s)
The judge angrily handed down a short sentence to the crying criminal.
5. adverb(s)
The judge happily handed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
6. verb name
The judge happily screamed down a long sentence to the unrepentant criminal.
7. verb tense
The judge will have had handed down a long sentence to the repentant criminal.

Michael said...

Well done, everyone.

But, Angel, note how the others made their changes cumulative. Also, your last verb tense is odd. Maybe you mean "will have handed down".