24 April 2015

*SENTENCE COMBINATION*

Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences.

Sentence 1: The Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants.
Sentence 2: Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties.
Sentence 3: The loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.

3 comments:

juliede33 said...

Many immigrant professionals find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada because of accreditation difficulties; therefore, the Immigrant Access Fund provides loans for internationally trained immigrants in which that loans help pay the costs associated with accreditation, training, or upgrading.


annie wesley said...

The Immigration Access Fund help to pay costs associated with accreditation difficulties,training,and upgrading for many immigrant professionals who find it hard to pursue their careers in Canada.

Michael said...

Good effort, Julie. But see Annie's response for an example of how you can fully integrate the different sentences. Good work, Annie!