8 January 2015


Correct the errors in the following sentence:

The silver, new, shiney car was drove by Tim and I when we  had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.

Solutions will be posted in the next edition of the blog.


Liudmila140 said...

Tim and I were driving the new shiny silver car when we went to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains. We saw some of tourist traps along the highway, a few wild animals, and not a single bear. The wild flowers were blossoming.

Michael said...

Good try, Liudmila; but I still see a few errors.

I will post the solution soon.