28 November 2014

*SENTENCE COMBINATION*

Learning to combine ideas into more complex sentences is an important writing skill. There are many ways to do this. Try to combine the following three sentences.

Sentence 1The spirit of Christmas seems to have been forgotten.

Sentence 2: People were literally fighting over the items on sale at the mall.
Sentence 3Christmas lights are going up and trees are being decorated.


4 comments:

Liudmila140 said...

Christmas lights are going up and trees are being decorated, but the spirit of Christmas seems to have been forgotten as people were literally fighting over the items on sale at the mall.

Olena140 said...

Even though Christmas lights are going up and trees are being decorated, the spirit of Christmas seems to have been forgotten, while people were literally fighting over the items on sale at the mall.

Michael said...

Well done.

But, Olena, I'm not sure that "while" is the best choice. Consider something like "as" or "for".

Olena140 said...

I was considering using "because". I opted out to use while in the meaning "during the time that; at the same time as." Wasn't it correct?