I am always eating my dinner late while I get home at 8:00 pm but the food is warmed quick in a microwave we brought at a neighbours garage sale.
1. Verb tense:
For repeated actions use the simple present tense: change “am eating” to “eat”.
2. Word confusion:
With a specific time reference, use ‘when” not “while”.
3. Word form:
The adverb is “quickly”--“quick” is an adjective.
4. Word confusion:
The word needed here is “bought”. The simple past tense of “buy”; “brought” is the past tense of “bring”.
5. Missing word:
The correct usage is “to warm [something] up”: “the food is warmed up”.
6. Article usage:
A specific microwave is referred to, so use the definite article (“the”).
Use a comma before a coordinating conjunction (but) when it separates 2 independent clauses. Also note that an apostrophe is needed in neighbours (neighbour’s) because it is a possessive noun.
Capitalize PM. (MLA format).
I always eat my dinner late when I get home at 8:00 PM, but the food is quickly warmed up in the microwave we bought at a neighbour’s garage sale.