Sentence 1: Marian is a graduate of Athabasca University.
Sentence 2: Marian was recently hired by a major corporation.
Sentence 3: She will be lead their international unit.
Sentence 2: Marian was recently hired by a major corporation.
Sentence 3: She will be lead their international unit.
6 comments:
Marian, a graduate of Athabasca University, was recently hired by a major corporation, and she will be leading their international unit.
A major corporation recently hired Marian, who is a graduate from Athabasca University, to lead their international unit.
Those are both good answers. Here is another possibility, which incorporate both of your ideas:
Marian, a graduate of Athabasca University, was recently hired by a major corporation to lead their international unit.
Marian, after graduating in finance from Athabasca University, a major financial institution, has hired her to lead its international unit.
As Maria graduated from the Athabasca University, a major corporation hired her to lead its international unit.
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