Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.
For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":
participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";
participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";
participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";
etc.
You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.
When all 7 changes have been made, do not repeat the original sentence; return to the top of the list, but keep building on the changes made by the previous participant.
Here is the sentence:
The doctor happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
2 comments:
The nurse happily told us the good news about our friend in the hospital.
The nurse happily told us the good results about our friend in the hospital.
The nurse happily told us the good results about our sister in the hospital.
The nurse happily told us the great results about our sister in the hospital.
The nurse Rose gracefully told us the great results about our sister at the hospital.
The nurse Rose gracefully told us yesterday, the great results about our sister at the hospital.
Good try, Diana. But there seem to be problems with #7, verb tense.
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