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My friends come over every weekend to play cards and watch the playoffs on TV. Sometimes the competition becomes very heated, and arguments break out over differences of opinion, but everyone usually has a good time.
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My friend come over every weekend to play card and watch the playoff on TV. Sometimes the competitions become very heated, and argument breaks out over difference of opinions, but everyone usually has a good time.
My friend comes over some weekends to play a card and watch a playoff on the TV’s. Sometimes the competitions become very heated, and an argument will break out over a difference of opinions, but he and I usually have a good time.
Leah Eng 140
Good try, both of you; but there are some problems with your answers.
"Cards," for example, cannot be made singular.
Here is a possibility:
My friend comes over on the weekend to play cards and watch a playoff game on TV. Sometimes, the competitions become very heated, and an argument breaks out over a difference of opinion, but everyone usually has a good time.
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