Sentence 1: Many people in Canada are looking forward to spring.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long a long winter.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
Sentence 2: Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long a long winter.
Sentence 3: This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places.
3 comments:
There is a grammatical error in sentence 2: "a very long a long winter."
This winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places, so many people in Canada are looking forward to spring which is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter.
Leah Eng 140
Thanks for pointing out the typo, Leah!
I think you answer could be organized a little differently. Here is a possibility:
"Spring is particularly appreciated in a country where most people experience a very long winter, and this winter has seemed longer than most, with snow still on the ground in many places, so many people in Canada are looking forward to spring."
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