31 March 2016

*ALL CHANGE!*

Change the words in the sentence below as indicated.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":


participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";


participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";


participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";

etc.


You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.


Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.


Here is the sentence:


An anonymous writer sent an angry letter to the editor of the local paper.

Changes:                                                                                                                          

1. subject noun

2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense

2 comments:

Leah said...

1. subject noun= An anonymous reader sent an angry letter to the editor of the local paper.
2. direct object noun= An anonymous reader sent an angry note to the editor of the local paper.
3. indirect object noun= An anonymous reader sent an angry note to the manager of the local paper.
4. adjective(s)= An unidentified reader sent an enraged note to the manager of the local paper.
5. adverb(s)= An unidentified reader swiftly sent an enraged note to the manager of the local paper.
6. verb name= An unidentified reader swiftly transmitted an enraged note to the manager of the local paper.
7. verb tense= Tomorrow, an unidentified reader will be swiftly mailing an enraged note to the manager of the local paper.
Leah Eng 140

Michael said...

Excellent!