Please change only the exact word in the sequence given. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.
For instance, if the original sentence is "Benson hurriedly told the bad news to his friends":
participant 1 could write "#1 Subject Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad news to his friends";
participant 2 could then write "#2 Direct Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his friends";
participant 3 could then write "#3 Indirect Object Noun: Michael hurriedly told the bad joke to his wife";
etc.
You are free to make as many changes as you wish. Just remember to number each change (and indicate the part of speech) so it is clear to everyone where we are on the list.
Participants who make all 7 changes will receive 2 bonus marks for their efforts.
When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.
Here is the sentence:
The salesman grudgingly offered the angry customer a small discount.
Changes:
1. subject noun
2. direct object noun
3. indirect object noun
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)
6. verb name
7. verb tense
2 comments:
1. subject noun= The clerk grudgingly offered the angry customer a small discount.
2. direct object noun = The clerk grudgingly offered the angry patron a small discount.
3. indirect object noun =The clerk grudgingly offered the angry patron a small refund.
4. adjective(s)= The clerk grudgingly offered the frustrated patron a full refund.
5. adverb(s) = The clerk willingly offered the frustrated patron a full refund.
6. verb name = The clerk willingly gave the frustrated patron a full refund.
7. verb tense= The clerk had willingly given the frustrated patron a full refund.
Leah Eng 140
Well done, Leah. But you have confused the direct object with the indirect object.
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