The silver, new, shiney car was drove by Tim and I when we had gone to Western Canada seeing the Rocky mountains and some of tourist traps along the Highway; but we seen little wild animals and not a single bear: however the wild flowers had been blossoming.
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When Tim and I drove to Western Canada to see the Rocky Mountains and some of the other tourist traps along the highway, we drove a shiny, new, silver car. Along the way, we did not see a single bear; however we saw many little wild animals and the wildflowers were in bloom.
Leah Eng 140
Good try, Leah. But there are still some errors that need to be fixed. Can you see them?
I will post the full solution soon!
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