1. As of yesterday we are already one-third of the way through the year. 2. In our school we are already one-third of the way through the year. 3. Sam and Jim are excited we are already one-third of the way through the year.
James, you subordinated the original clause instead of adding a dependent clause. And what about the other sentences?
Patty, your second sentence adds a phrase rather than a dependent clause, and your third sentence would be clearer without the conjunction omitted: "Sam and Jim are excited *that* we are already one-third of the way through the year."
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The work is getting easier because we are already one-third of the way through the year.
1. As of yesterday we are already one-third of the way through the year.
2. In our school we are already one-third of the way through the year.
3. Sam and Jim are excited we are already one-third of the way through the year.
James, you subordinated the original clause instead of adding a dependent clause. And what about the other sentences?
Patty, your second sentence adds a phrase rather than a dependent clause, and your third sentence would be clearer without the conjunction omitted: "Sam and Jim are excited *that* we are already one-third of the way through the year."
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