This blog is for students taking English 140-189 at Athabasca University.
The deer that live in the woods behind my house like to chew on the bark of the fruit trees I planted in my garden.
Good try, but I only see one change. Are there no more?
On the other hand, I am pleased to see that you didn't fall into the trap of changing words like "deer", "woods", and "bark"!
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The deer that live in the woods behind my house like to chew on the bark of the fruit trees I planted in my garden.
The deer that live in the woods behind my house like to chew on the bark of the fruit trees I planted in my garden.
Good try, but I only see one change. Are there no more?
On the other hand, I am pleased to see that you didn't fall into the trap of changing words like "deer", "woods", and "bark"!
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