My sisters’ friends went to various city parks to participate in the Canada Day celebrations. At some parks there were speeches by dignitaries. At others, there were special children’s events, complete with games, clowns, and face painting. Wherever they went, there were happy, flag-waving crowds of proud Canadians.
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Our sister's friend went to one city park to participate in Canada Day Celebration. at one park there was speech by dignitary. At another there was child's event, complete with game, clowns, and face painting. Whenever he went there was happy, flags-waving crowd of proud Canadian.
My sister’s friend went to one city park to participate in the Canada Day celebration. At this park, there was speech by a dignitary. At another, there was a special children’s event, complete with a game, a clown, and face painting. Wherever he went, there was a happy proud flag-waving Canadian crowd.
Good try, rehabo. But watch your punctuation and article use.
Good job, Audrey. You just missed one article. Can you see it?
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