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Last year, I had celebrated Family Day with my friends and we went skiing.
If my dad hadn´t taken an early flight, he wouldn´t have arrived on time to celebrate Family Day.
ZEINAB: You're missing a conditional;-)YOSUA:Well done:-)
I would have been happy, if I had celebrated Family Day with my friends and went skiing.
Alexey ENGL140If I had lived in Alberta or in some other provinces of Canada, I would have celebrated Family Day every year.
ZEINAB:That's better, but you need to correct the verb form and the punctuation;-)ALEXEY:Almost--there's a plural that should be a singular;-)
Alexey ENGL140If I had lived in Alberta or in some other province of Canada, I would have celebrated Family Day every year.
ALEXEY: Good!
If I had purchased a green phone, the witch doctor would not have called on Family Day last year.
If I hadn't of been sick; I could of thoroughly enjoyed Family Day as it was intended.
If they had infomed us earlier, we would have liked to go to the Family Day celebrations in the park.
GEORGE: That's an interesting sentence! It's also a good one:-)KENNETH: The verb tenses are good, but you have a word confusion error and a punctuation mistake;-)PEGGY: Nicely done!
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Last year, I had celebrated Family Day with my friends and we went skiing.
If my dad hadn´t taken an early flight, he wouldn´t have arrived on time to celebrate Family Day.
ZEINAB: You're missing a conditional;-)
YOSUA:Well done:-)
I would have been happy, if I had celebrated Family Day with my friends and went skiing.
Alexey ENGL140
If I had lived in Alberta or in some other provinces of Canada, I would have celebrated Family Day every year.
ZEINAB:That's better, but you need to correct the verb form and the punctuation;-)
ALEXEY:Almost--there's a plural that should be a singular;-)
Alexey ENGL140
If I had lived in Alberta or in some other province of Canada, I would have celebrated Family Day every year.
ALEXEY: Good!
If I had purchased a green phone, the witch doctor would not have called on Family Day last year.
If I hadn't of been sick; I could of thoroughly enjoyed Family Day as it was intended.
If they had infomed us earlier, we would have liked to go to the Family Day celebrations in the park.
GEORGE: That's an interesting sentence! It's also a good one:-)
KENNETH: The verb tenses are good, but you have a word confusion error and a punctuation mistake;-)
PEGGY: Nicely done!
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