17 January 2014


Change the words in the following sentence as indicated.

The excited children eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.

Please change only the exact word in the sequence given, and wait until someone else has posted the next change before making another. Each participant should build on the changes made by the previous participant.

For instance, Participant 1 writes #1 Subject Noun, and changes the subject noun; Participant 2 writes #2 Direct Object Noun, and changes the direct object noun, etc.

Each participant should make just one change at a time, following the order indicated below.

When all 7 changes have been made, return to the top of the list and continue.


1. subject noun
2. direct object noun          
3. indirect object noun                  
4. adjective(s)
5. adverb(s)    
6. verb name      
7. verb tense


AndreaS.140,143 said...

1. Subject Noun
The excited shoppers eagerly awaited Santa at the mall.

Michael said...

Well done, Andrea!

It doesn't seem like we have enough participants for this activity, so next time, feel free to make as many changes as you like!